Email: a problem with building repairs
Task
Your apartment building is having its balconies repaired. The work starts at 7 a.m. every day, including weekends, and it is very noisy. Write an email to the building manager. In your email:
• describe the problem;
• explain how it is affecting you;
• suggest a solution.
Answer · 177 words
Dear Ms Patel,
I am writing about the balcony repairs that began in our building on Monday. I understand that the work is necessary, but the noise starts at 7 a.m. every day, including Saturdays and Sundays, and it continues until late afternoon.
This is causing me real difficulties. I work night shifts at the hospital three times a week, so I usually sleep until noon. Since the drilling started, I have only been able to sleep for three or four hours, and last week I made a small mistake at work because I was so tired. Several neighbours with young children have told me that their babies are also being woken up.
Would it be possible to start the work at 9 a.m. instead, and to keep weekends quiet? If the schedule cannot change, perhaps the noisiest jobs could be done in the afternoon. I would also appreciate a weekly timetable so that residents can plan ahead.
Thank you for considering this request. I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind regards,
Chen Wei, Apartment 4B
Why this answer works
- Every bullet point is covered in its own paragraph, in the same order as the task.
- The tone is polite but firm: it accepts that the work is needed before asking for a change.
- Specific details (night shifts, three or four hours, 9 a.m.) make the problem believable.
- About 190 words — inside the 150–200 range, with time left to check.